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Tender_and_sore
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Username: Tender_and_sore
Post Number: 3
Registered: 03-2006
| | Posted on Friday, March 17, 2006 - 04:08 pm: | 
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I struck up a relationship with someone 18 months ago and after deliberately losing touch for about 3 months, I got in touch with him again and we have agreed to meet. He knows I am scared and so has asked me to write a story of how I think the day should go. He has already told me to expect to be punished for losing touch and to bring my paddle with me. I need to know who should add the final chapter.......
The powerful jets refreshed Alyeska's body as she stood under the shower. In less that two hours time she would finally meet with David for the first time and hopefully feel his strong arms safely holding her. But what is he didn't like her, maybe didn't like what she was wearing or the colour of her hair. Should she have asked him what he wanted her to wear...but then maybe he would have thought her weak and incapable of making any decisions. As she wrapped a soft fluffy towel around her body she walked slowly back across the hallway to her dressing room and looked at the clothes she had laid out on her table the night before. A plain chiffon cream blouse with a chocolate brown short skirt with a small split at the back, smart and sexy without looking cheap. The shoes were no problem - a nice pair of cream and brown stilletto sandals to finish the outfit off. The underwear was however something of a problem. Alyeska had laid out a very pretty matching bra and thong set, but what if David carried out his promise to punish her on their first date......he certainly made it clear to her in his last email that she was to expect to be punished....maybe he would just spank her over her skirt....but what if he was to raise her skirt up...a little thong would offer no protection at all. She went back into her underwear drawer and rummaged around until she found a lace pair of camisole panties...they would be better at least they would protect her skin because she felt sure that if he did carry out his threat then he would not be so cruel as to pull her panties down to spank her....but then again she had worried him a lot. Alyeska pulled her camisole panties on, hooked her bra, buttoned up her blouse and stepped into her skirt. Rolling her stockings on and then slipping into her shoes she stepped back to look at herself and try and see what David would see. She sprayed some scent onto her wrists and behind her ears and then went downstairs to check the time..... less than 50 minutes left before they met....it was time to leave to go and meet him…..Alyeska put the picnic basket on to the back seat of her car. David had emailed her the previous night with a list of things to put into the basket...they were going to find a nice place to sit by the river bank together, away from crowds of people so that they could talk and make plans . Checking her reflection in the mirror of the car Alyeska clicked the button and then drove out of the garage, down the driveway and out onto the open road. Her phoned beeped, signalling a message...it was from David ...."Drive carefully Babe" the message read "I am here waiting for you". She pushed her foot further down on the accelerator and speeded off down the windy country roads. All sorts of things flashed through her mind as she drove....she wanted David in lots of different ways....she wanted him to make her safe, hold her, kiss her, but most of all to make love to her....she had ached for him for over a year now, talking only on the internet. But would he think she was cheap and trashie if she warmed to his advances, if she wanted him physically. She could feel the dampness between her legs at the thought of Davids kisses on her bare naked skin, his hot breath in her most private places. The heat went to her cheeks and Alyeska knew that she was blushing just at the thought of what may happen. Alyeska decided that she would take David's lead and that whatever he wanted of her she would do but that she must not make the first move in any way to undermine David. Again her phoned beeped with a message from David "Did you remember to bring everything I asked babe" the message read. In her mind she went through the list he had given her the night before...... Blanket to sit on...yes.......bottle of Moet .....yes she had chilled it all night so it would be cold..........cheese, pate, fresh crusty bread.....Alyeska had picked all those up fresh from the deli the night before.......paddle for her punishment....Oh God! She had completely forgotten all about that...she had broken the one for David in the Caribbean and had not replaced it....Alyeska felt tears spring to her eyes .... already she had let him down on the very first thing he had asked her to do.....she was useless....why did he want to be with her when she could not even carry out a simple request. Maybe he would forget, he had to forget didn't he ! Alyeska knew that she could not tell David a lie because she was already in trouble she texted him back with the message "Hope you like what I am bringing ... ME" She had not lied, but she had not told the truth either. She let her thoughts drift back to a picture of them both laying on the blanket, relaxed and comfortable with each other as their kisses became more and more passionate. Alyeska suddenly snapped back to the present as she realised she had reached her destination and there in front on her sitting on the bonnet of his car was David and God....he was gorgeous.......... Alyeska parked her car behind David's and turned the engine off. Her legs had gone to jelly and she knew that she was not going to be able to get out of the car and walk over to where David was waiting for her. He must have sensed her hesitation because he slipped down off the bonnet and walked over to Alyeska's car, opening the door he leant down and placed the most gently kiss on Alyeska's forehead. "I thought this day would never come" he whispered. He offered his hands to her and Alyeska took them, swinging her legs out of the car and then stood to face David........again her mind started swimming with thoughts.... what was he thinking...was he pleased with what he saw....maybe he was disappointed.....did he think he had made a mistake....God why had she ever thought this was a good idea. Then David stood back, looked Alyeska up and down and gave her the broadest smile "You are just as I imagined you would be" he said....the smile was enough to give her the little bit of confidence she desperately needed. He opened the back of Alyeska's car and took the picnic basket out "Right, lets waste no time on this gorgeous day" he said and with that he held his hand out again to Alyeska who quickly folded hers into his and then started to walk down towards the fields across the lane. David was brimming with confidence, chatting away as they walked, talking about the drive down, his two little girls, how much he had been looking forward to today. Alyeska listened. They walked through two fields which were full of poppies and buttercups and then as they cut in between two trees they came upon a small clearing right beside the river. "Perfect" David said as he put the picnic basket down and opened it up to take the blanket out. "Is this spot okay for you" Alyeska just nodded her head. David busied himself laying out the blanket and wondered if something was wrong, Alyeska had spoken not one word since she had pulled up in the car. He sat down on the blanket and patted a place for Alyeska to join him. When she was seated he llifted his hands to touch her face and noticed her flinch. Was she afraid of him? He leant across and kissed her gently but this time on the lips...unsure of the response that he would get. He was pleasantly surprised when Alyeska returned his kiss just as warmly and sweetly as he had given. Slowly he moved his arms to take her to him and again felt her stiffen - he wondered if maybe she did not like him now that she had seen him in person. "Alyeska is something wrong" David asked, with concern showing on his face. Alyeska shook her head and leant forward to kiss David, but he gently put his hands on her shoulders and said "Talk to me, what is wrong" Alyeska looked up at David and simply said "I am afraid"......"Afraid of me?" said David. "Afraid of everyone" she replied simply as if this was the most normal thing in the world to say. "You don't have to be afraid Ayleska, I will not let anything happen to you, you will be safe with me. I will look after you, care for you, love you, please believe me". By way of an answer Alyeska moved closer and cuddled up to David..."I know you will David, thank you". They sat then in silence, but not an awkward silence, a silence which enveloped them both into their own little world - a world where Alyeska felt safe, where no-one could find her. Over the next hour David gradually got Alyeska to open up a little and relax. They talked about her new house and her move and about her friend Maz and how David hoped that one day he would meet her. They opened the picnic that Alyeska had brought and while Alyeska cut the cheese and bread, David poured the Moet. Slowly Alyeska became more relaxed as the champagne warmed her and David found that he was able to touch and caress her without her flinching. After lunch Alyeska got a fit of the giggles and asked David if he had ever played cloud guessing. "What on earth is cloud guessing" David asked. "Lay down on your back and look up in the sky" she said "And you have to find a shape in the clouds, tell me what it is and then I have to find it....look I will go first" And with that Alyeska lay back and with a serious look started scanning the clouds up in the sky. David lay down next to her "A Butterfly....you have to find the butterfly in the clouds" she said giggling. Try as David could he could not find the anything that remotely looked like a butterfly...."Look she said pointing .....they are the wings......"Looks more like a cauliflower to me" Said David and they both fell about laughing. David leaned over and ran his tongue across Alyeska's top lip. That little move caused her whole body to react. It soon turned into a soft kiss. He kissed so passionately. With her hands draped across his neck he pulled her closer to him. Alyeska felt he was also having a reaction. He started caressing her breast through her blouse. She was all flushed and her nipples were as hard as rocks. David knew that Alyeska wanted him, but he was afraid now to move things too fast. "Do you want me Alyeska"? "Yes" she whispered. Soon they were locked in a sweet kiss. Skin touching skin. Her full breasts rubbing against his body. His mouth sucking on her neck. Alyeska reached down to touch him and David was already at attention. As his mouth found her breast and played with her nipples she moved her hand up and down his shaft. He kissed his way down to her most private area, licked, tasted, and played the way she had never had done to her before. David brought Alyeska to a sweet orgasm and after her body spasms,she wanted to make him feel just as good. She circled her tongue around his head before taking all of him into her mouth. He was a big man, and she enjoyed every minute of it. The way she continuously sucked with out bringing it out of her mouth had him moaning with pleasure. Alyeska knew that the wetness she was feeling and tasting was more than just water. Once again she was in his arms sucking this time his tongue. "Oh David, oh this feels so good." "Alyeska, I've wanted you for a very long time. I've always wondered what it would be like to have the honor of pleasing you. Oh, you feel so good!" David lay Alyeska down on her back so he could slip inside her. He pressed against her harder and harder, and she welcomed it. . His mouth tasted her breasts. All of it was total ecstasy. She began to kiss him teasingly, which drove them both to the edge. While kissing and biting each other's lips they both climaxed. He slowly brought him self to the sitting position while still holding on to her. And for the first time in as long as Alyeska could remember she felt safe…..They lay back down on the blanket and David poured the last of the Moet onto Alyeska's breasts and drank it up. They looked again at the clouds trying to make more patterns. After a few minutes.... "A Dragon" said David - " you have to find a dragon", but when he turned he saw that Alyeska had fallen asleep curled up against his chest. Not wanting to disturb her he lay looking for more patterns in the clouds. Soon David gently moved Alyeska's arms from around him and while she slept he collected together the remains of the picnic to pack away. As he opened the basket he saw the email which he had sent the night before in a side pocket, reading it he saw where Alyeska had put little ticks against each thing as she had packed it, or a note saying "Get out of fridge in morning". Next to the request for the paddle Alyeska had written "Pick one up in the morning before leaving". He looked in the basket but it was empty and David wondered if Alyeska had deliberately forgotten to bring it. He watched her sleeping and knew in his heart that she would not have been so devious, so there must be an explanation. Perhaps he should forget the punishment that he had promised to carry out...after all they had had a lovely morning and she was finally starting to relax in his company, but then he remembered all of the weeks and months he had worried, waiting to hear from her...all the times he had checked his emails hoping for a message...anything...to know she was okay....and had heard nothing until last week. David walked over to a tree stump and sat down on it, he really did not know what to do.... he knew that Alyeska had come out of a very bad relationship where she had been physically and mentally abused .....surely it was up to him to show her the difference between punishment because you love someone and abuse because you want to control someone. But was today the right day to do it? He got up off the tree stump and slowly walked back over to Alyeska knowing that the decision he had made would seal his future relationship with Alyeska. He knelt down and gently shook her, as she opened her eyes he kissed her and said ......} |
Ziggy
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Username: Ziggy
Post Number: 14
Registered: 03-2006
| | Posted on Saturday, March 18, 2006 - 07:31 am: |
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OMG you can't leave it like that!! LOL I am on the edge waiting for the mext chaper . please |
Tender_and_sore
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Username: Tender_and_sore
Post Number: 7
Registered: 03-2006
| | Posted on Saturday, March 18, 2006 - 08:01 am: |
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Hi Ziggy - Unfortunately I have to leave it like that at the moment .... This is a genuine true story. I really have met David on the internet and we are really planning to meet up as. I explained in the first few lines, David knows I am apprehensive and wants me to tell him how I want the day to go so the story at the moment is fictional...the ending to it will be reality. I have emailed David to ask him if he wants to finish the fictional story and am awaiting his response but if we meet as planned next week then the next chapter will be written exactly as it happens. xx |
Sassyaawaa
Junior Spanko
Username: Sassyaawaa
Post Number: 92
Registered: 03-2006
| | Posted on Saturday, April 08, 2006 - 08:30 am: |
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Ziggy, do you think that Tender is okay? That she got to meet David? Or do you think that she is doing the same thing as she did with David, keeping everyone in suspense?
Tender? Where are you?
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Ma_vie_en_rose
Junior Spanko
Username: Ma_vie_en_rose
Post Number: 173
Registered: 01-2006
| | Posted on Saturday, April 08, 2006 - 12:42 pm: |
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In answer to the question:
I would think, if he gave you the assignment as a part of the punishment, it would be not fulfilling it if you don't want to write the last chapter. When I first read the question, I assumed the last chapter was "and then after this date, they..." But if he was asking how you thought the day would go, It most likely included the punishment.
I can understand not wanting to write about yourself being spanked. I was given a similar assignment by someone I know, to describe a good disciplinary spanking. I was given guidelines. But rather than even just list them, talking about myself, I wrote a story with two fictonal characters. Even changing his gender.
But I'm not wholly sure how he'll react. Just like I'm not sure David will be thrilled that you left off half of your assignment. Even with all the justifications in the world, there is an element of aversion in using your fictitious self.
If you think it would help to write about Sammuel and Elizabeth, then maybe you could do it that way.
I guess it's a bit late for this looking at dates, but... ah well, I tried. I hope it went well. |
Tender_and_sore
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Username: Tender_and_sore
Post Number: 9
Registered: 03-2006
| | Posted on Sunday, April 16, 2006 - 05:25 am: |
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I am so very sorry to all of you for not continuing the "Story" and thank you for your care and concern as to my whereabouts. I did meet with David and what started as a ...'what might be' has now become actually real events and now I am finding it hard to share them. I am going to change the names as kindly suggested by Ma vie en rose and hope to share it with you all shortly.
Alyeska x |
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