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Shylah
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Username: Shylah

Post Number: 513
Registered: 10-2005


Posted on Thursday, December 15, 2005 - 11:11 am:   Edit Post

Beth had woken up that next morning and did not remember how she got home. She was in shock...stunned. In the days and weeks that followed, she had kept up with her classes, she worked, she ate, she watched television, she fed her cat. She had never cried. She wasn't going to give in to that. She needed the strength to carry on with day to day things.

She went to a family gathering and although she tried to smile and enjoy the day, her heart just wasn't in it. Her mother had taken her aside and asked what was wrong. Not wanting to reveal too many details, she simply told her mother that she had recently ended a relationship and was still in love with the person but that it was not going to work. Her mother was sympathetic and told her she was available to talk anytime. Beth was grateful but knew she wouldn't be able to tell her mother everything. Her dad and taken her aside as well and handed her an envelope. Opening it, she was surprised at the contents. It was a check for a considerable amount.

“You have been working hard on your classes and I know it can't be easy. Let us help you.” he said to her.

“Thanks, Dad, yes I can use this very much.”

She hugged him tight and knew she had Eric to thank for this. Without his coaching, she would have still been without her family and alone with her cat.

Back at her apartment, she was studying one day on the new computer she had gotten with the money from her folks. Concentrating on what she was doing, she didn't hear the knock on the door at first. When the knocking became louder, irritated at the interruption, she rose to answer it.

“Who's there?” she demanded.

“It's Eric. Open the door.” was the answer.

She started to reach for the door knob but then stopped.

“Why should I?” she thought. “After what he did, what he said, why should I just open up because he ordered it?”

“No, Eric. Go away.” she said to the door.

There was a pause.

“Please, Beth. Open the door?”

“Eric, we said all there is to say. I don't want to talk to you. Now please go away.”

“Beth, I'm asking you. PLEASE open the door?”

She sighed and turned the door knob, opening the door to not see Eric but a VERY large bunch of flowers being held by two arms and supported by two long legs.

“Ok Eric, I know you're in there somewhere. Come out and fight like a man.” she said.

“Let me in before I drop this.” he replied.

She guided him inside and led him to a chair making sure he still held the flowers. She then went to her easy chair and sat down.

“Do I just sit here holding these?” he asked.

“For now, yes.” she said. “Tell me first why you are here with an entire forest in your face?”

“I came to ask for your forgiveness and to tell you something important.”

“I'm listening.” she said.

“I can't say it with all this in my face!”

She rose and walked over to him, reaching out to part the flowers to reveal his face.

“Ok, now you're face is free. Talk.”

“Very funny. Ok, have it your way. I love you. I'm sorry. I was a jerk. I was wrong. I was angry, not at you but at me for being stupid only I didn't realize it at the time and I reacted wrong. I'm an idiot. I would get on my knees and beg you to forgive me but it's a bit difficult at the moment.”

“Uh huh.” she said. “Just like that huh? I'm supposed to forgive you and things go back to the way they were? I don't think so.”

“I don't want things to go back to the way they were before. I didn't know I loved you until you left. And you were right about me. I didn't want all the things you talked about. At least I didn't think I did. I thought if I just let you go and didn't contact you, I would be able to go back to the life I had been leading and nothing else would matter. Well, it did matter. It DOES matter. I do want those things now. And I want them with you.“ he let out a large sigh and looked to her hopefully.

She stared at him for a moment to let everything he said sink in. Reaching over, she took the flowers from him and put them on the table carefully.

“Oh thank God!” he said. “I'm not sure just how much longer I could have held on to those. Listen, Beth, I've been totally lost. I do love you. I can say that honestly. And I know you love me, or you did. You do still love me don't you?”

She turned to look at him. She returned to her easy chair and sat down.

“Yes, Eric. I do still love you. I'm just not sure we can be together after what happened. You frightened me. In all the time we had been together, after everything you did spanking me, you never did anything that scared me. That night, I was scared. I was hurt. And I just don't know if I can trust you again.”

He dropped his head in his hands.

“I've really messed this up, haven't I? Even if you didn't love me, I wish I could regain your trust above all.”

Several minutes passed without either of them saying a word.

“Now that you're hands are free, what was it you said about getting on your knees to beg forgiveness?” Beth said.

Eric raised his head from his hands quickly and looked at her with his eyes narrowed.

“You're going to milk this arent' you?” he said. “Make me grovel. Make me beg, huh?”

“Oh yeah.” she answered, nodding her head.

Lowering himself onto his knees, he walked across the floor to her with his hands upturned.

“Ok...I'm begging. PLEASE forgive me! I'm SORRY. I'll NEVER do anything EVER again to hurt you or cause you to be frightened. “ He took her hands in his and continued. “I love you. I want to marry you. I want that family you want. And I want to put you across my knee right now and spank that smug look off your face!”

“Oh gosh, with a proposal like that, I'm swept off my feet.” she said. “Try again.”

“Right. The romance part. Got it.”

He cleared his throat. Reached into his pocket and brought out a small box. Remaining on his knees, he took her hands again and looked into her eyes. Digging down deep into his soul, he mustered up all his love and spoke.

“I love you. Please say you will marry me. I'll take care of you. You'll never have to work again. I'll protect you and I promise to never try and control you. I'll never make you feel small or insignificant. I'll cherish you all my life. Beth, will you marry me?”

At that, he opened the small box to reveal a diamond ring.

“OH...MY...GOD!” she cried. “That thing is huge! Oh...and...yes, I'll marry you. You may kiss me now.”

Grinning, he placed the ring on her finger, leaned forward and kissed her long and deep.

“I'm taking you out for a celebration.” he said. “And when we get home, you're going to get a very long spanking, little girl. My knees are killing me!”


THE END
Take my heart and soul. But please don't step on it, it breaks easily.
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Ziggy
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Username: Ziggy

Post Number: 1640
Registered: 08-2005


Posted on Thursday, December 15, 2005 - 11:18 am:   Edit Post

I knew it would end wonderful, what a great story shylah. Thank you very much for writing it
when caught run faster then him !!
I am a TA junkie !!

TWO MORE WEEKS BEFORE MY HUBBIE COMES HOME AGAIN
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Shylah
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Username: Shylah

Post Number: 516
Registered: 10-2005


Posted on Thursday, December 15, 2005 - 11:28 am:   Edit Post

Thank you Ziggy. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I'm not sure what happened to make it post 3 times!!

*smacking my puter* bad puter!! bad! bad!
Take my heart and soul. But please don't step on it, it breaks easily.
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Redhinney
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Username: Redhinney

Post Number: 119
Registered: 10-2005
Posted on Thursday, December 15, 2005 - 09:07 pm:   Edit Post

SHylah,
I just knew that they would be together. There is a romantic person inside of you. Thank you so much for posting it. Just what everyone needs at this time of year.
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Poofette
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Username: Poofette

Post Number: 35
Registered: 10-2005
Posted on Friday, December 16, 2005 - 12:02 am:   Edit Post

Awwwwww...lovely ending. Great story!

Poofette
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Shylah
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Username: Shylah

Post Number: 525
Registered: 10-2005


Posted on Friday, December 16, 2005 - 05:19 pm:   Edit Post

Thank you all so much for your nice feedback. I have more written but want to "fine tune" them a bit before posting them.

I really appreciate your comments!!!
Take my heart and soul. But please don't step on it, it breaks easily.
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Hunny
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Username: Hunny

Post Number: 988
Registered: 10-2005
Posted on Friday, December 16, 2005 - 07:17 pm:   Edit Post

Oh, Shylah, it was wonderful! Why can't all men do that? You really do write wonderful stories!
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Zippo
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Username: Zippo

Post Number: 1433
Registered: 09-2005


Posted on Saturday, December 17, 2005 - 01:40 am:   Edit Post

Outstanding Shylah!! Cant wait for your next series...keep them comming girl, you have a wonderful gift for writing.
The Brat Tamer...changing brats attitudes one smack at a time
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Lisarn
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Username: Lisarn

Post Number: 1
Registered: 12-2005
Posted on Saturday, December 17, 2005 - 05:09 pm:   Edit Post

Hey shylah
Great story. Hugggggsssss to you.
lisa
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Poofette
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Username: Poofette

Post Number: 37
Registered: 10-2005
Posted on Sunday, December 18, 2005 - 12:14 am:   Edit Post

Quit fine tuning and post more....

Greedy Poofette

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