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Shadowrose45
New member
Username: Shadowrose45
Post Number: 33
Registered: 10-2005
| | Posted on Wednesday, November 02, 2005 - 08:24 pm: | 
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The Mistake Part One
Usual disclaimers: Please don’t copy and post anywhere. © Names changed to protect the innocent. Is it true? I'm never telling!
She was in a mood. Keri sat in the parking lot of the store seething. He’d promised to be there at noon to pick her up, but hadn’t shown up. So what if he’d warned her to wait for him. She figured half an hour was long enough!
Muttering words to herself that would have gotten her ass tanned, she started the mile walk back to his house. Too bad if he’d told her not to walk. It wasn’t his business if heat made her sick, was it? All these angry thoughts were going through her head as she walked in the 90 degree heat.
She’d finally come all this way to meet him…and what did he do? Drop her off at a damn store and just leave her there with “Wait here, I’ll be back at noon. And do not try and walk back, Keri.”
By the time she was half-way back, she knew walking had been a mistake. Her heart started racing and she knew she was going to pass out. She’d barely made it into a gas station to get out of the heat before she fell over.
As she debated whether to walk the rest of the way back to his house, or back to the store, she saw his car pull into the parking lot. Apparently, he’d seen her.
She stormed out of the station and got into the car. She opened her mouth to bite his head off, but one look at his face stopped her. He was furious. She could see it in every line of his jaw, the muscles along it were actually clenched.
He looked over at her, his blue eyes boring into hers, and taking in how the walk had effected her. Her face was beet red, and she was breathing quickly. “Are you alright, Keri?” he asked.
“Yes,” she said softly. She knew better than to even think of arguing with him when he used that tone. “I-“
He cut her off. “Not a word,” he warned.
The drive back to the house was short and silent. She walked into the house, sure that he’d have her over his lap in like ten seconds. But he didn’t. She got herself something to drink and sat down, watching TV. Finally, after about an hour, she felt more like herself again.
She looked up and saw him walk into the room. He’d gone into his study the minute they walked into the house. “Corner.”
She gulped. He still looked furious with her. She warily sidestepped him as she went to the corner. She stood there for what she was sure was at least an hour, but was probably only five minutes. Her mind raced thought all the things that he might do. They’d known each other on the Internet for quite a while, but she’d only been there in person for two days. He’d spanked her, but it had been mostly for fun.
He walked into the room and glared at her. “Lose the jeans, little girl,” he said.
Keri looked at him with wide eyes. “Yes Sir,” she mumbled.
(Message edited by shadowrose45 on November 02, 2005) |
Pagan
Spanko
Username: Pagan
Post Number: 237
Registered: 05-2005
| | Posted on Wednesday, November 02, 2005 - 09:05 pm: |
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Well, well, well. One of yours. I was going to ask, but I wasn't sure if they were only for sale. 
Hm...nice start. But short, Girl! Come on now.
And like you say to me....WHERE'S THE NEXT CHAPTER???? I HATE waiting! Where's the rest? When is she going to get spanked?
POST THE FREAKING NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!  |
Pagan
Spanko
Username: Pagan
Post Number: 238
Registered: 05-2005
| | Posted on Wednesday, November 02, 2005 - 09:06 pm: |
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Still waiting. Come on...endangering one's health is virtually always ground for getting one's ass tanned with a Top in the joint. |
Pagan
Spanko
Username: Pagan
Post Number: 239
Registered: 05-2005
| | Posted on Wednesday, November 02, 2005 - 09:07 pm: |
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Hello? You may not realize this, but when I make a request it's really just courtesy. What I mean is "This is what you will drop everything to do".
Mistress Pagan
AKA She Who Must Be Obeyed |
Hunny
Junior Spanko
Username: Hunny
Post Number: 183
Registered: 10-2005
| | Posted on Wednesday, November 02, 2005 - 09:31 pm: |
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 Your hillarious, Pagan!
Come on Shadow! Please post the rest! |
Neoserenity87
Spanko
Username: Neoserenity87
Post Number: 249
Registered: 10-2005
| | Posted on Thursday, November 03, 2005 - 12:28 am: |
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That's awesome shadow....but the shortness is sorely depriving us! I dunno pagan, maybe we should talk this over with Lash, chapter deprivation is surely a spankable offense!
 more please!
my life is a like an Iraqi box of chocolates, you never know what you're going to get, and even if you did...how the hell could you read the Arabic written on the map inside the damn box?
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Make_me
New member
Username: Make_me
Post Number: 11
Registered: 09-2005
| | Posted on Thursday, November 03, 2005 - 06:25 am: |
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Next chapter PUUURRRLEEAASSEEEEEEE!! |
Shadowrose45
New member
Username: Shadowrose45
Post Number: 34
Registered: 10-2005
| | Posted on Thursday, November 03, 2005 - 10:42 am: |
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LOL
I haven't written part two yet- I'll write it today before I leave. |
Ziggy
Advanced Spanko
Username: Ziggy
Post Number: 851
Registered: 08-2005
| | Posted on Thursday, November 03, 2005 - 01:03 pm: |
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oh can't wait |
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